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Take me to a place of ethereal dreams To the mystic court of fairy kings and queens Lead me far down the rabbit hole Come away and bring my soul To the mischievous magical masquerade balls With seemingly endless candlelit halls To palaces filled with twilight dancers Terpsichorean ladies and prancing prancers Rhythmic body's wearing hypnotizing colours Mesmerise me and forget about all others Let feet move to the music, let it draw me in Let the endless stars caress gentle skin Anonymous behind masks of luminous feathers Unbinding myself of all earthly tethers I see eyes smouldering from across the room The hint of a smile eno